You did awesome! The screen is well done and I love how you colored it! And I love the wedding Dress! the cute paint palettes and the digital circuitry details as lace super cute! I like how you kept her bald and you just nailed that dress. You did damn good on the perspectives.

I really like the colors you chose and how you kept the sketch parts un-colored really make the colors you picked to pop. I love the detail in both digital and traditional parts. The only thing I would work on is your background, while the solid white works with the colored parts of the image, the white and the colored part seem to over take the sketched parts of the image. Next time consider testing out some kind of back ground, even if it is just a different solid color.

I don't think you meant to upload it like this? It looks like you uploaded a thumb nail? I would really love to see the full size picture your WIP picture looks good and I like the colors I can see in the small picture.